Saturday, 6 April 2013

Descriptive writing: The Street at Night

The wet, desolate streets of the city rested in silence as the starry black sky wept over it. The water in the portholes shimmered by the glow of the bright, yellow street lamps. The small, green trees on the roadside swayed as the strong breeze hit them.

Above a faded zebra crossing, a traffic light frantically changed colors seeming rather like a disco light. A watchman snored comfortably on his dark brown stool under the protection of his shops's roof. Huge giant buildings stood besides the street, quiet as if taken over by an army of libraries. Some windows gave out white and yellow lights, but the others were pitch black.

It seemed like the clouds had gotten a sudden fascination to the moon and wrapped themselves around it. The moon's faint glow passed through them, coloring them white from grey.

The cool monsoon air carried a sweet moist scent like a candy shop kept inside a refrigerator.

The pattering of the rain, which was now deaf to ears, was interrupted time by time during the night. Once a car passed by. Stray dogs began barking, while the deafening music from the car echoed around the street. The car soon disappeared and the dogs stopped barking satisfied that they had scared the car away. Later, a taxi came down the road and parked. A bunch of young kids came out laughing emphatically. The taxi drove away but the children stood at the corner of the lane, yet laughing vigorously. A man screeched out from his window and cursed at the noisy children who went mute immediately. A few lights flickered open through the windows and nosy neighbors looked out to inquire. Aunties made sure they had  memorized enough points to gossip over tomorrow. Finally the furious man went back and the children departed for home.

The streets of the city now rested again in lifeless silence except the gentle pattering of the raindrops. It lay there just like it had for many a changing years ready to rise when the sun's auburn rays would start to cast grey shadows over it.

30 comments:

  1. Beautifully written
    Amazing description!!!!!!!!

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  2. Wow!! I love it so much! Great ideas I used it for my work!! BTW I a kid not doin GCSE!! Lol!! XD😜😜

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    1. it's beautiful
      and it takes time to write such things
      appreciate it
      don't point out flaws
      don't shave yourself up the author's ass

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    2. I would like to see you attempt

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    3. quality over quantity :)

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    1. Shut after your gap tooth created a black hole to another dimension

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    3. Awe snap nice writing btw

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  5. This is so beautiful!
    Do you mind if I use it?
    I won't benefit commercially as I'm using it in anonymity....
    please?

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  6. beautifully written

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  7. It's greatly inspiring and beautifully written.

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  8. Really helped me a ton with my essay. Thank you

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  9. wow this was probably the best description I've ever read

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  10. This is great! Thanks, whoever you are! XD

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  11. hola soy dora jadore this speech

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  12. good i like it but can you do of you arrive on an island

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  13. Can I borrow your phrases for my use ?

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